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[Flashticles]

Could be better :C

I thought a simple "SHHHHT" of wind through your teeth would suffice for transition noise. I had to turn down my volume as my head and ears began to hurt. The Jokes were funny sometimes and others weren't. Overall there was some value to the movie though. :)

pillowbasher responds:

believe it or not, that is actually quieter than I had it originally haha. But I'll keep that in mind for next time.

[Need A Dispenser Here]

Need A Dispenser Here!

!ereH resnepsiD A deeN

BreadFruitLock responds:

Need a dispenser here!

[Sprite TV 3!]

one good part.

I laughed at the frogger part. That was it. Oh and The Menu and preloader game were just.. Fantastic and creative...BUT

Then I constantly see these long parts that drag out into 3. All weren't very interesting.
The Halo one had potential, but then it basically went in the wrong direction. (The one where nothing happens and nobody moves anywhere)

Suggestions:

My big suggestion would be not to continue sprites, but seeing how hopeless that would be I might as well give tips on how to become better with your hilarity issues.

1.Reused Jokes aren't funny. (Hint Mario in the Alley purchasing Shrooms)
2. Fecal matter and piss aren't as funny as they used to be.
3. Stating the obvious joke kind of kills it.

TITROTU responds:

Some people just have different tastes. Thanks for the suggestions.

[Ghost Out Part 3]

Wow Red..

Im shocked. I've known you for a long time, yet I've never seen this miniseries before. I made sure to watch from episode one and have to say.. Wow you have done a fantastic job... I want to see more just like everyone else.. you got me hooked.

Your other movies you used your same, messy style. I think in this genre it can be appreciated so much more :D

RedMongoose responds:

thanks ff I'm glad you like it :)

[Easy Way Out]

vey nice job.

A fresh change in the clock style with a neat story to follow.

cleaning it up may have helped but i liked it messy too

[Nimbin: Behind The Flash]

Not too great.

While I did enjoy your drawing style, the animation completely kills it. The lip sync was unbearable to look at. :C

Arm tweens were kinda bad... and WTF.
Her whole body moves whenever she blinks.

I was hoping to get past this problem by just enjoying the movie... but it was nothing. Nobody moved or did anything, and most of your movies involve Shit so no surprise whenever I saw a piece of poop slowly tweened across the screen.

So basically the 4 is all for your drawing style.
2/5

Gerkinman responds:

Im just curious as to a better way to animate something entirely made of vector art. And yeh i know the lip sync was bad :(

[Two-Hour Time Trial VII]

Not too Good. :C

I liked two parts only and they were both Dad and me. The Graphics were superb on the rare few.

The Marc M one would have been great if the music didn't shut it out and if the voice was of better quality.

If they had more time to work they most likely could make greater parts, but limiting the amount of time shouldn't give the score a handicap.

Rudy responds:

The Dad N' Me Parts are mine.

oh babeh

[SKATER V2 Episode: 04]

You have a funny style

I hated the beginning animation of this movie with a passion, but as it progressed you got better and I found myself laughing at the way you animated reactions and everything.

Good work, I might check in with the rest of these every once and a while ;D

[OMG.swf collab]

Wow I've never laughed so hard.

Maybe Because I know how good you guys really are, watching you suck on purpose is just fucking hilarious. It reminds me of the good ol' days when I was on par with this animation quality.

Improvements: MORE LOUD NOISES.

[Edible Castle #9]

I know where it is.

I found it along with the criminal mastermind. They are both locked in my room making a bunch of racket, you should come quick, because I'm sure he's planning his escape.

Also the cartoon was fantastic, yet again you found a way to make a simple graphic cartoon work in an entertaining way.