Although Mostly True.
You truly did need a Voice Actor, It was tough to feel your anger and frustrations.
Great Job, but it did need more animation, I wasn't too satisfied with what was presented. And although you have good points, you yourself have made a movie that is not original because I have seen this done about 5 or 6 times before. They all complain about the same things, all in the same tone as well.
The Dilution example was pretty clever though, I thought that was great.